I have written this short story for a competition. What do you think?

I think you will be an amazing writer in your lifetime. i have reaad some of your other work and i find it amazing...you have some very good potential and a very good mind. This is a very good story i think. Like i noted in one fo your other works, i dont know much about how writing is supposed to be written or anything but i find all of your storys and such very wonderful. You have a very good eye for writing.